Coffeesh0p Flash Advert

[Barxy]

http://www.coffeesh0p.com/adverts/flash/coffeesh0p.html

Alright chaps?

Please give this advert a look and let me know what you think. How could i improve it?

Thanks

[SkillRaver]

Hi,

Hows it going, it's lookin good. what i would suggest though is where it says coffeesh0p at the end, could you make it so that the text has a transparent background because the white box outline doesn't look very professional. I would also add a 1px wide black or dark grey border around the outside of the ad. Could you add shadows to the text?

I hope i've been of some use, please could you do me a favor in return and join my new forum, Im low on numbers at the moment so everyone who joins is really helping.

If you leave some posts I will add a banner advertising this site to the banner rotator. You scratch my back and i'll scratch yours! 

All the best!

[Allez]

Yeah, ditto on the white box. I'm not sure of shadows would look better or worse though. I'd have to see it.

SkillRaver, this ain't the place to look for numbers. It's just me, Sync and maybe Random. Less of a forum and more of a community workbench/notebook.

[Barxy]

Cheers for the input guys. I'll get to it right away